Subject: Nursing
Topic: Nurses working under stress
Paper details:
I have already written the paper but I need someone to make the corrections to improve it. This is the feedback I received from my instructor: Turnitin is displaying 37% similarity content used from other sources which is extremely high and above the normal threshold of 30%.
Try and scrub the paper to paraphrase more – you will need to review Turnitin content to see where it is appearing as many areas are not direct quotes which is why it is concerning – this means you directly used content as direct quotes but was not credited as such.
The opening paragraph is one area noted immediately. I’ll attach here and show you. If you have questions, reach out to me. The reference list needs to be placed in alphabetical order by author last name. Your references are not formatted in APA 7th ed recommendations.
Review proper formatting of journal article titles, proper capitalizations, italicized words and numbers in the references and CORRECT before final submission.
In APA, the author/date system is used, you do not need to write “the study” as it is known by including the author in the sentence, be clear and concise and directly to the point: Li et al. (2017) focused on (delete Another study review…)
King – similarity research paper.docx Pavlos et al was cited in text but not found on the reference list – ALL must match exactly: in-text citations and reference listings.
Avoid unnecessary words and sentence starts with little content value to the paper: It was, Therefore, there is, there was, a lot, etc. just be clear, concise, and directly to the point.
Your actual paper is only nine pages long, you might consider expanding on your project setting and project plan, goals, objectives, etc. at the end to meet the 10 pages and how you will use the research to support.