Explanation of World War Discussion Paper
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Explanation of World War Discussion Paper
Explanation, World, War, Discussion, Paper
You need to respond to at least two of your peers’ discussion post for this week. The reflection should demonstrate an understanding of the topic and should include referenced evidence from the readings to demonstrate your view point to receive full credit. Instructions: Length is between 100-200 words (1 to 2 paragraphs)
Student #1
WILLIAM MARSHALL
Although it was not a single reason behind WW1, “shortly after the assassination of Austria’s Archduke, Franz Ferdinand, the war begins and lasted more than four years.” the article said. The war left more than 20 million dead and 21 million wounded, which can be attributed to trench warfare and the number of countries involved in the war. Another social issue or reason being behind the war was the European expansion.
The sources state” European nations had empires across the globe, where they had control over vast swath of lands.” The expansion of European nations as empires can be seen as a key reason of the war, because countries like France and Britain expanded their empires which resulted the increase of tension among the European countries. conflicts over alliances were another social issue behind the war, the alliances “promised that each country would support the other if war ever broke out” the article states,
”The alliance between France, Britain, and Russia formed 1907 and was called the triple entente caused the most friction among nations”. Which made Germany feel like this alliance surrounding them was a threat to their power and existence, as tension continued to rise over alliances, the preexisting alliances fed into other countries declaring war against one another in the face of conflict.
References: www.norwich.edu
Student#2
JOSE SUAREZ HERNANDO
There is no simple and straightforward reason that caused the First World War, however, there were different causes and motives that led to its development.
At the beginning of the 20th century Europe had achieved an important growth in different areas and was politically, economically and militarily dominant on a world level. Even though an attempt was being made to maintain a balance of power between the countries of the region there were some conflicts and differences between nations.
Some events that could lead to war were the dismiss of the general Bismarck which caused the possible alliance between Germany and Russia to fail and instead led to the formation of the triple alliance of Austria, Germany and Italy and the dual alliance of France and Russia.
Also, in this moment there was a tension between Great Britain and France because of the commercial rivalry and the ambitious of the nations of expanding and colonizing territories and with the crisis of Morocco, in which Germany was asking to have the same trading rights as France in Morocco lead to the alliance of France and Great Britain.
The triggering event of the war was the assassination of Archduke Franz Ferdinand of Austria on June 28, 1914 who after an assassination attempt by a youth group of the secret organization “Black Hand” was finally killed by Gavrilo Princip who shot his wife.
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Content (worth a maximum of 50% of the total points) |
Zero points: Student failed to submit the final paper. |
20 points out of 50: The essay illustrates poor understanding of the relevant material by failing to address or incorrectly addressing the relevant content; failing to identify or inaccurately explaining/defining key concepts/ideas; ignoring or incorrectly explaining key points/claims and the reasoning behind them; and/or incorrectly or inappropriately using terminology; and elements of the response are lacking. |
30 points out of 50: The essay illustrates a rudimentary understanding of the relevant material by mentioning but not full explaining the relevant content; identifying some of the key concepts/ideas though failing to fully or accurately explain many of them; using terminology, though sometimes inaccurately or inappropriately; and/or incorporating some key claims/points but failing to explain the reasoning behind them or doing so inaccurately. Elements of the required response may also be lacking. |
40 points out of 50: The essay illustrates solid understanding of the relevant material by correctly addressing most of the relevant content; identifying and explaining most of the key concepts/ideas; using correct terminology; explaining the reasoning behind most of the key points/claims; and/or where necessary or useful, substantiating some points with accurate examples. The answer is complete. |
50 points: The essay illustrates exemplary understanding of the relevant material by thoroughly and correctly addressing the relevant content; identifying and explaining all of the key concepts/ideas; using correct terminology explaining the reasoning behind key points/claims and substantiating, as necessary/useful, points with several accurate and illuminating examples. No aspects of the required answer are missing. |
Use of Sources (worth a maximum of 20% of the total points). |
Zero points: Student failed to include citations and/or references. Or the student failed to submit a final paper. |
5 out 20 points: Sources are seldom cited to support statements and/or format of citations are not recognizable as APA 6th Edition format. There are major errors in the formation of the references and citations. And/or there is a major reliance on highly questionable. The Student fails to provide an adequate synthesis of research collected for the paper. |
10 out 20 points: References to scholarly sources are occasionally given; many statements seem unsubstantiated. Frequent errors in APA 6th Edition format, leaving the reader confused about the source of the information. There are significant errors of the formation in the references and citations. And/or there is a significant use of highly questionable sources. |
15 out 20 points: Credible Scholarly sources are used effectively support claims and are, for the most part, clear and fairly represented. APA 6th Edition is used with only a few minor errors. There are minor errors in reference and/or citations. And/or there is some use of questionable sources. |
20 points: Credible scholarly sources are used to give compelling evidence to support claims and are clearly and fairly represented. APA 6th Edition format is used accurately and consistently. The student uses above the maximum required references in the development of the assignment. |
Grammar (worth maximum of 20% of total points) |
Zero points: Student failed to submit the final paper. |
5 points out of 20: The paper does not communicate ideas/points clearly due to inappropriate use of terminology and vague language; thoughts and sentences are disjointed or incomprehensible; organization lacking; and/or numerous grammatical, spelling/punctuation errors |
10 points out 20: The paper is often unclear and difficult to follow due to some inappropriate terminology and/or vague language; ideas may be fragmented, wandering and/or repetitive; poor organization; and/or some grammatical, spelling, punctuation errors |
15 points out of 20: The paper is mostly clear as a result of appropriate use of terminology and minimal vagueness; no tangents and no repetition; fairly good organization; almost perfect grammar, spelling, punctuation, and word usage. |
20 points: The paper is clear, concise, and a pleasure to read as a result of appropriate and precise use of terminology; total coherence of thoughts and presentation and logical organization; and the essay is error free. |
Structure of the Paper (worth 10% of total points) |
Zero points: Student failed to submit the final paper. |
3 points out of 10: Student needs to develop better formatting skills. The paper omits significant structural elements required for and APA 6th edition paper. Formatting of the paper has major flaws. The paper does not conform to APA 6th edition requirements whatsoever. |
5 points out of 10: Appearance of final paper demonstrates the student’s limited ability to format the paper. There are significant errors in formatting and/or the total omission of major components of an APA 6th edition paper. They can include the omission of the cover page, abstract, and page numbers. Additionally the page has major formatting issues with spacing or paragraph formation. Font size might not conform to size requirements. The student also significantly writes too large or too short of and paper |
7 points out of 10: Research paper presents an above-average use of formatting skills. The paper has slight errors within the paper. This can include small errors or omissions with the cover page, abstract, page number, and headers. There could be also slight formatting issues with the document spacing or the font Additionally the paper might slightly exceed or undershoot the specific number of required written pages for the assignment. |
10 points: Student provides a high-caliber, formatted paper. This includes an APA 6th edition cover page, abstract, page number, headers and is double spaced in 12’ Times Roman Font. Additionally, the paper conforms to the specific number of required written pages and neither goes over or under the specified length of the paper. |
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