What needs to be revised:
Introduction is too vague. Most important!!!! is to write CLEAR GUIDING CLAIM. It should be exactly in this format: In J.J.Espinoza’s “Outside of the body there is something like hopeвЂк poetry collection <or in 3 specified poems> she uses images of <what category of images she uses> <examples of images of missing time, collapsed sun, mind, spill bucket of truth, mirror, light(from poem “Return to lightвЂк)> <to do what?> to show feelings < feelings of what? to show what?> <example acceptance and freedom, perspectives on the process to learn how to love herself, transition, and etc>. In my poems I’ve used images of <example nature – mightiness of the sea, green waves, petal of the flower bloom, sun, sunset, sunflower, yellow flowers (from my imitation “Return to seaвЂк) to show feelings <of what?> <warmth, joy, love>. Use these examples. Guiding claim should be word by word as above, except of what in <> – this is examples! Guiding claim should be CONNECTED to all 3 original poems and 3 imitations. Common images for all 6 poems: nature, real world (elaborate on that, write guiding claim based on that) and different feeling.
Analysis:
J.J Espinoza is a transvestite. Her collection of poems is about feelings of depression, hating herself, her body, violence, judgmental of others, what is eventually transforms in understanding of loving/accepting her body, her nature. Images in original poems a related to these concerns. DonвЂTMt hesitated to write straight forward.
My imitations: Imitation 1. Feelings: memories, love, joy. Categories: nature, humans.
Imitation 2. Feelings: imaginary freedom, substitution of real feelings, fake. Categories: real world, drug/dope. Examples: eyes never sparks, hearts are empty, waste time on useless things, lonely, sinful, hopeless, dreamless ect.
Imitation 3. Feelings: hope. Categories: god, real world. Pick examples.
Do analysis based on this bullet points.
Conclusion: DonвЂTMt write just summary of above analysis. Try to push what in boundaries. Make it challenging. What was understood while writing imitations to original poems. Mention stylistics of the structure.
Keep structure:
Intro (guiding claim)
Poem 1 analysis, Imitation 1 analysis
Poem 2 analysis, Imitation 2 analysis
Poem 3 analysis, Imitation 3 analysis
Conclusion about poems (not just summary, challenging)
Don’t use any other sources except what is attached!!!!!
PS: Orders this paper on this website. Original instructions attached as Final project. Espinoza’s poetry collection also attached. Part I of the paper “Final Project_ draft” which is need to be revised
If assigned writer is unavailable again assign to another, but don’t keep bonus. I’ll add bonus if result of revision comes up good.