Order ID 53563633773 Type Essay Writer Level Masters Style APA Sources/References 4 Perfect Number of Pages to Order 5-10 Pages Description/Paper Instructions
Assignment 2 PIA Marking Guide
Student:
Ability to clearly describe the project, undertake the necessary research, write with clarity and cohesion and reference as required.
Very Good –Perceptive and discerning description of the project, with evidence of advanced research skills. Correct grammar, spelling and punctuation. Excellent use of references. Good – Clear and thoughtful description of the project, with evidence of good research skills. Mostly correct grammar, spelling and punctuation. Good referencing.
Satisfactory – Sufficient coverage of most of the relevant points, with evidence of adequate research. Grammar, spelling and punctuation could do with more work. Adequate referencing.
Needs Improvement – Reasonable attempt, but missing some key relevant points; evidence of some suitable research. Grammar, spelling and punctuation errors detract from your work. Referencing needs work.
Unsatisfactory – Incomplete and undeveloped description; poor and/or insufficient research; patchwork paraphrasing rather than writing in own words. Grammar, spelling and punctuation errors make it hard to read. Referencing needs substantive work.
Ability to identify the personal information and privacy issues and stakeholders
Very Good – Pertinent, insightful and comprehensive identification of personal information and stakeholder interests, with evidence of broader insight into the privacy issues. Good – Relevant, logical and thorough identification of personal information and stakeholder interests with evidence of useful insight into the privacy issues.
Satisfactory –Acceptable, mostly correct and reasonable identification of personal information and stakeholder interests with evidence of some insight into the privacy issues.
Needs Improvement – Limited and partially correct identification of personal information and stakeholder interests with some but limited understanding of privacy issues.
Unsatisfactory – Sketchy, incomplete and/or incorrect identification of personal information and stakeholder interests. Confused, disjointed and lack of appreciation of privacy issues.
Ability to map the information flows
Very Good – Demonstrates superior and skillful understanding and mapping of the information flows bringing in all stakeholder perspectives. Good – Demonstrates skillful understanding and mapping of the information flows bringing in most stakeholder perspectives.
Satisfactory – Demonstrates acceptable understanding and mapping of the information flows from organisational perspectives.
Needs Improvement – Some limitations in understanding and mapping of the information flows, missing key information but mostly correct
Unsatisfactory – Insufficient understanding and mapping of the information flows, missing key information and/or mostly incorrect.
Ability to identify compliance issues for the relevant Australian Privacy Principles
Very Good – Perceptive and discerning identification of, and commentary on, the compliance issues for all of the relevant APPs. Demonstrates superior understanding of APPs and application in the project context Good – Skilled identification of, and commentary on, the compliance issues for most of the relevant APPs. Demonstrates clear understanding of APPs and application in the project context
Satisfactory – Reasonable identification of, and commentary on, the compliance issues for enough of the relevant APPs. Demonstrates adequate understanding of APPs and application in the project context
Needs Improvement – Identification of, and commentary on, the compliance issues for some of the relevant APPs. Demonstrates some lack of understanding of APPs and/or application in the project context.
Unsatisfactory – Poor identification of, and commentary on, the compliance issues for the relevant APPs. Demonstrates significant lack of understanding of APPs and application in the project context.
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QUALITY OF RESPONSE NO RESPONSE POOR / UNSATISFACTORY SATISFACTORY GOOD EXCELLENT Content (worth a maximum of 50% of the total points) Zero points: Student failed to submit the final paper. 20 points out of 50: The essay illustrates poor understanding of the relevant material by failing to address or incorrectly addressing the relevant content; failing to identify or inaccurately explaining/defining key concepts/ideas; ignoring or incorrectly explaining key points/claims and the reasoning behind them; and/or incorrectly or inappropriately using terminology; and elements of the response are lacking. 30 points out of 50: The essay illustrates a rudimentary understanding of the relevant material by mentioning but not full explaining the relevant content; identifying some of the key concepts/ideas though failing to fully or accurately explain many of them; using terminology, though sometimes inaccurately or inappropriately; and/or incorporating some key claims/points but failing to explain the reasoning behind them or doing so inaccurately. Elements of the required response may also be lacking. 40 points out of 50: The essay illustrates solid understanding of the relevant material by correctly addressing most of the relevant content; identifying and explaining most of the key concepts/ideas; using correct terminology; explaining the reasoning behind most of the key points/claims; and/or where necessary or useful, substantiating some points with accurate examples. The answer is complete. 50 points: The essay illustrates exemplary understanding of the relevant material by thoroughly and correctly addressing the relevant content; identifying and explaining all of the key concepts/ideas; using correct terminology explaining the reasoning behind key points/claims and substantiating, as necessary/useful, points with several accurate and illuminating examples. No aspects of the required answer are missing. Use of Sources (worth a maximum of 20% of the total points). Zero points: Student failed to include citations and/or references. Or the student failed to submit a final paper. 5 out 20 points: Sources are seldom cited to support statements and/or format of citations are not recognizable as APA 6th Edition format. There are major errors in the formation of the references and citations. And/or there is a major reliance on highly questionable. The Student fails to provide an adequate synthesis of research collected for the paper. 10 out 20 points: References to scholarly sources are occasionally given; many statements seem unsubstantiated. Frequent errors in APA 6th Edition format, leaving the reader confused about the source of the information. There are significant errors of the formation in the references and citations. And/or there is a significant use of highly questionable sources. 15 out 20 points: Credible Scholarly sources are used effectively support claims and are, for the most part, clear and fairly represented. APA 6th Edition is used with only a few minor errors. There are minor errors in reference and/or citations. And/or there is some use of questionable sources. 20 points: Credible scholarly sources are used to give compelling evidence to support claims and are clearly and fairly represented. APA 6th Edition format is used accurately and consistently. The student uses above the maximum required references in the development of the assignment. Grammar (worth maximum of 20% of total points) Zero points: Student failed to submit the final paper. 5 points out of 20: The paper does not communicate ideas/points clearly due to inappropriate use of terminology and vague language; thoughts and sentences are disjointed or incomprehensible; organization lacking; and/or numerous grammatical, spelling/punctuation errors 10 points out 20: The paper is often unclear and difficult to follow due to some inappropriate terminology and/or vague language; ideas may be fragmented, wandering and/or repetitive; poor organization; and/or some grammatical, spelling, punctuation errors 15 points out of 20: The paper is mostly clear as a result of appropriate use of terminology and minimal vagueness; no tangents and no repetition; fairly good organization; almost perfect grammar, spelling, punctuation, and word usage. 20 points: The paper is clear, concise, and a pleasure to read as a result of appropriate and precise use of terminology; total coherence of thoughts and presentation and logical organization; and the essay is error free. Structure of the Paper (worth 10% of total points) Zero points: Student failed to submit the final paper. 3 points out of 10: Student needs to develop better formatting skills. The paper omits significant structural elements required for and APA 6th edition paper. Formatting of the paper has major flaws. The paper does not conform to APA 6th edition requirements whatsoever. 5 points out of 10: Appearance of final paper demonstrates the student’s limited ability to format the paper. There are significant errors in formatting and/or the total omission of major components of an APA 6th edition paper. They can include the omission of the cover page, abstract, and page numbers. Additionally the page has major formatting issues with spacing or paragraph formation. Font size might not conform to size requirements. The student also significantly writes too large or too short of and paper 7 points out of 10: Research paper presents an above-average use of formatting skills. The paper has slight errors within the paper. This can include small errors or omissions with the cover page, abstract, page number, and headers. There could be also slight formatting issues with the document spacing or the font Additionally the paper might slightly exceed or undershoot the specific number of required written pages for the assignment. 10 points: Student provides a high-caliber, formatted paper. This includes an APA 6th edition cover page, abstract, page number, headers and is double spaced in 12’ Times Roman Font. Additionally, the paper conforms to the specific number of required written pages and neither goes over or under the specified length of the paper. GET THIS PROJECT NOW BY CLICKING ON THIS LINK TO PLACE THE ORDER
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